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Hunger.

There's a burning deep inside myself
A whisper in my ear

An ache in my stomach
And a dryness on my tongue

I listen to my senses
The signs point to one thing

It's building up
I simply cannot take it

So I run to the room that I know so well
Grab the nearest thing I find
And eat it all in one huge bite

I'm hungry!

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  • andhearts. ox
    August 29
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    Nice!

    Impressive. Your short poems are very effective.