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A Light Shines in Darkness

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Did you hear that?

It’s the sound of no oxygen.

 

"Time’s Up" smelling salts.

 

 

It takes someone really deep to get as fucked up as an alcoholic.

 

 

Humble endings are more important than humble beginnings,

so why be hurt when one can celebrate a smile?

 

elegant (?) irony

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  • Heroesrox
    August 29

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    That picture makes me laugh! I really like your piece, though. It's a unique thinking piece and I love thinking pieces!

    Awesome work here. Keep penning brilliance. Best wishes to you!


    • Timothy Cameron gold member
      August 29

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      Thanks, Heroesrox

      Appreciate the insight. I am rarely accused of thinking, so it's refreshing to hear it. LOL! Thanks. :-)