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My Disguise

I put n a mask
On my feelings. I
Don't want anyone to
Decode me.

3rd graders and
Adults alike try to figure
Out this girl underneath,
But I am shielded with a cloak.

Underneath, I am shy, sensitive,
And am deeply submerged in love. I
Hardly show my feelings.

    This is my disguise.

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    August 22
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    welcome to all poetry

    Good capture here, most people feel this way. Nice write


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  • Let.Love.In
    August 21
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    I say this is good. You start of with this question of who you are but in the end you uncover part of yourself. Good write