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Oh Bill Turn

Your so far away
angry
big
spinning out of control
dont look over here
pass me by
I can almost here you now
thunder all around us
black skys
no wind
the silence before the storm
millions of people watch
the front just lingers
pass me by.

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  • goalsv
    August 20
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    I kije the hope and the talk to the storm. Excellent job.


  • Puppydog gold member
    August 20

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    I BELIEVE IT WILL MISS US TO

    Yes, Vickie, I am glad the full force did not hit down there where you are I believe it will pass well out sea past us so we will probably not even get a little of it. 's