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Fate Kills the Hero

Fate shall kill the soldier
No matter how many
He has saved

The hero of the war
Must die
Must suffer

He, along with the others
May be remembered
Or forgotten

For the hero lives to fight
And in this fight,
All must die

Fate has trapped the hero
In a prison for eternity
As he has killed
And shall be killed

War has tempted Fate
And so the hero must
Die

Author notes

This was a quick write for a contest, however I quite enjoyed trying to come up with some things to make it fit

A contest entry

I really hope you like it, it was quick and what came to mind :)

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Comments


  • Unbreakable3
    August 20
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    Thanks for the entry I really like this!


    • dakota620
      August 20
      Edit | Reply
      Thanks for the chance to write it, I really liked this band name and this is the first thing that came to mind. Thanks for the comment!