Hold me together
I’m holding on
Kiss me to pieces
I’m falling apart
Put me under
Your love, my drug
Tear me open
& hug my heart
Open my eyes
With a breath of a kiss
Show me happiness
And unending bliss
Hold my hand
& tell me, lover
Do you see me
In the stars?
Can you picture me
Wrapped in your arms?
Hold me together
I’m holding on
Kiss me to pieces
So I won’t fall apart
Author notes
I am crazy about this guy 
A contest entry
- Love Poems by poorme.
400 points, ended August 26, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Whatcha think?
Comments
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Aw, this is precious. I love the tenderness and the thought of kissing you to pieces so you don't fall apart.
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Yummy
this made me hungry for some sweet loving...thanks...really enjoyed the tenderness -
Flows very nicely and clearly expresses the feelings in the poem. Thanks also for Authors notes--which can help clarify any questions. I particularly like the phrase, "..kiss me to pieces so I won't fall apart." Great job!
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I liked this, it was simple but it gets to the point. This was really pretty, and i know how you feel about that. lol.
Great write, and keep writing.
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Great poem!!! its simple and it hits a home run
keep up the great writing
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