Live fast & make bad choices ... [Ride of a lifetime!]

Pretty girl left behind, a world full of

hard choices. She was once the dream

of all girls, now she's the girl off in a daze.

Filled with heroin and adderall. She looks

decayed from the outside in. Mind filled

with a cloudy mess.

She was told to live fast. Drugs and sex,

bad choices made. Her life's coming to

a stop. Slowly she's dieing.

Days and nights are ~~blended together~~.

Her fam[ily] has been lost to her sight.

She will die with no friends, no family,

no pain... N

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Dirty Pretty by AbidoodleCullen. 400 points, ended August 29, 8 entries
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JaydinC
August 22

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H and Addy
It's how I used to speedball when I could stomach that kind of abuse. Reallly heavy here darling. I've walked through the fair pictured above spun off my ass. It was a dark sick time for me, and without even knowing me you painted this picture so perfectly it makes me wonder who the girl in the story really is.

She was told to live fast. Drugs and sex,

bad choices made. Her life's coming to

a stop. Slowly she's dieing

Straight from a group session, just replace 'she and her' with 'I and me' respectively.

I don't know what else to say about this write...just perfect.
- Brooklynn Tainted
  August 23
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  Thank you for commenting on the poem. Im glad someone could understand it.