He’s the stormy blue to my emerald green that’s infused in our hazel eyes
He’s the silent stream of tears to my screams of fury that make up our relationship
He’s the Television to my book that make up our differences
He’s the hip-hop/rap to my grunge and alternative that makes up our musical tastes
He’s the day to my night that makes up our sleep patterns
He’s the mall to my wal-mart that makes up our value on money
He’s the Escalade to my Sedan Deville that make up our unique driving habits
He's the blunt to my bowl that make up our fiendish sides
He's the gym to my skateboard that make up our take on losing weight
He's the beginning to the end of my sentences that make up our conversations.
He is me and I am him
Together we are infused, blended, entwined & forever caught in one another’s eye, because we have problems & we sure know how to fight, but when push comes to shove we make it all alright. And I know if I ever walked away it’d be the day my heart died, the day my eyes dried & never again would emotion (of any sorts) spring from me. I know I complain about how he hurts me with empty promises & yes’ to death, but the fact of the matter is… The boy makes me feel.
I have never in my life FELT love like this. I can’t describe to you the rivers that flow between us when we hug. How they run so deep & I can feel his love transferring from skin on skin contact. The current carries me, and I'm beseeched, emblazoned, enveloped in all his love & glory, and zI wouldn't change it for the world.
Now I know how Jake felt.....
Author notes
August 18, 2008 - August 18, 2009 B.M.L. B.A.L.
Jake = an old best friend. When describing the love he feels he told me that the word love means nothing to him and that how he felt could only be felt. No word would ever amount to the feelings he felt. Now I understand.
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rivers of love run deep...
that is such deep dedication. I love the creative way you expressed your interdependence and total love. Especially like the lines:
"He’s the silent stream of tears to my screams of fury that make up our relationship"
that's magic.
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This has got me thinkin that - maybe thats what its all about,you find someone who completes you,even if only in some ways.Maybe we have to learn that we are lucky to find someone who does this,and of course that person will have thier faults as well(thats life) but this idea that we should be so blessed as to find perfection - it's ridiculous! I mean - I dont pretend to bring perfection into a relationship and so what makes me think that this "perfect match" could even exist. It's some fairy tale shit = to think that way. But who doesnt like to dream!
I've had a few girls who completed enough in me that I was satisfied to contemplate "forever" but unfortunately,I've had alot of betrayal and thats when imperfection crosses the line into - unacceptable!
I quess the only other option would be - to settle for "anyone" that gives you attention and sticks around but I'm not interested in that either! It's funny cuz I've thought that every relationship I've been in - that I found that person and to slowly realize I was wrong would've been better than to abruptly discover,like I have, that I wasnt even close.
I congratulate you on a year and even despite the things I know about ya'all relationship - it is yours and I would suggest you make the best of it!
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Uh ohhhh...Bre Bre's smitten for someone lol....this is great..the love transferring part and rivers is cheesy..and I mean that in the nicest way...so tell us, is this actually true? Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
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Yeah, this is dedicated to my boyfriend Brendon, August 18th was our one year anniversary, and yes It's cheesy, but I am corney when I'm in love & he loves me depite my corney/cheesyness.... I'm a goofball what can I say? Thank you so much for your compliments!
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I seriously love this poem. It reminds me so much of me and my boyfriend, and i know i'd feel the same if we ever parted. Such a wonderful poem
Xxx
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Nice
What a write I liked it very much "He is the day to my night that makes up our sleep patterns" hits home grandly because my wife and I have the same trade off. Never fear with determination you can make it work, well atleast we have for about 15 years
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Thank you! I must learn your secrets cause it's driving me crazy!
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Your welcome
And what secrets must you learn? I don't want you to go crazy.
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a great write, it truly makes others understand how you feel, and helps them to feel it to, at least, while they're reading the poem.
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Thank you very much. I was afraid it's be akward & no one would understand it, but you just reassured me! So thank you very much!
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