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Natures Call

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Upon gentle breeze
rustle the leaves
stirred of natures breath
her kiss blown the wind

fragrant scents arouse
dreams of hopes, desires
in accompaniment her sonnet
to life's chorus

Sweet melody her voice resonates
easing troubles held tight
relinquished now her soothing tones
reassurance tomorrows sun

held within her embrace
warmth replaces harsh reality
slowed is times hectic pace

rhythm her bosoms
rise and fall
her beating heart
baton to life's trueness

patter of her cleansing tears
gives assurance of
second chances
to loom the horizon

solace to a soul
carried aloft
by her kiss
gentle a cheek
held forever one's mind

Author notes

Got a chance to go for a long walk a few days ago at a park despite a light drizzle.....it still lingers my mind. Pic found http://www.pics.am/details.php?image_id=22001

This writing may change still thinking on it.....

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  • Carolina Moon gold member
    August 20

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    Those are some thoughts you had running through your mind...and you have written them beautifully. I loved it all but especially:
    "Sweet melody her voice resonates
    easing troubles held tight
    relinquished now her soothing tones
    reassurance tomorrows sun"
    for this made me think of something that happened just this morning. Glad to see your work again Rick..tis wonderful.


    • Rclane gold member
      August 20
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      Thank you so much for the kind comment and your time in reading. I've been working so much as of late it seems like I've no time for me anymore......maybe someday I'll find more time.