with this morning’s frost
scents of last-nights fallen leaves
a burst of autumn
Author notes
Traditional Haiku
5,7,5 syllables
my zen poetry
A contest entry
- Haiku. by And Hyetal.
790 points, ended October 16, 57 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
your suggestions are always welcomed
Comments
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Brilliant!
This is just perfection. Wonderful flow, imagery, scent & 'aha'! A trophy winner. 
All the best in the contest. My...my simple entries are so outranked!
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wow. this is so amazingly beautiful. i really love the description and place you take us. good luck and take care,
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thank you sweetie...for dropping in to read all the entries...
including mine
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like some nice slow lovemaking
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now you're talking red...
mornings are great *smile*
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autumn can't come soon enough....i'm sick of summer beautiful KU
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summers are my favorite...probably because I am an avid lover of the beach
autumn has its beauty also...indian summers especially
hugs
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sure have to agree with Frogzter... I do love to read your haiku
and I do love autumn
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thanks juls...I love writing them...and I take a lot of time and effort for that perfect ku...it might take a life time lol
I find the traditional are the hardest to do...I love the challange
for ya
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You pen the best haikus ever my friend! This one is no exception! Lovely~
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thank you hun...for dropping in and commenting...and of course the lovely smile you gave me
hugs
mal
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