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Digested self


Fragmenting teeth 
Yellow and black
A splintered mouth
Chews fecal fat 

A Toxic meal
Of digested self
No antidote
To fix your health

Gag reflexing
Acidic sick
Stomach sags
From eating brick

A toxic meal
Of digested self
No antidote
To fix your health

Mildewed napkin
Mystery stains
Noxious releases
From maggot brains

A Toxic meal
Of digested self
No antidote
To fix your health







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  • Candyknife gold member
    August 20

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    umm... ew ? lol

    well as much as i liked the flow of it it made me a little nauseous lol
    nice write, and i hope this means youre back ?
    nice to see you writing/ posting again


    • Deathletter
      August 21
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      Thank you hon!

      Im glad you liked it even if it did put you off your lunch lol Yep i should be about much more now been sifting through the bullshit and its all about done now. Thank you so much Rena *hugs* Always a pleasure to see, speak and hear from you.