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Missing you

This is Sweet-Sins. I am bored. Neek!
What to do, I don't really know?
This is annoying- I can't speak!
What to do, on my own?
Now I am building my strength to heal,
but I just can't forget the way I feel;
And  know this sounds really bad,
but Honey I just want you back...

And there is nothing more true,
than that I...
              ... am missing you...

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  • Parth Sawhney
    November 15
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    sweetly written...nothing aches more than missing your love..
    hope you get ur love back soon..

    ~Parth


  • Luckybuddy
    September 20

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    great job

    well the poem is great over all. I think you really want that person but indeed luck is not at your side.

    But keep on trying and i am sure everything will be fine.

    Now I am building my strength to heal,
    but I just can't forget the way I feel;
    And know this sounds really bad,
    but Honey I just want you back...

    good work with these lines.

    Stay happy

    Lucky

  • izzy1804
    September 5

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    I like it! although this bit threw me for a little bit "This is Sweet-Sins. I am bored. Neek!" but other than that it was good. I love how the last stanza is set out. Good job.