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A shot in the dark



Toil of reaping now is done,
and I sit beneath a gnarled oak tree
to raise a glass of summers past
to the queen of night,
the waxing harvest moon.



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  • Diablosanjil gold member
    August 21
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    Simply put bu Beautifully done.. I wan to go sit like this now and see all that is.. You did great on this. Thank you for sharing.


  • Puppydog gold member
    August 20

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    BEAUTIFUL!!!!

    I have done this but it was so long ago way back on my grandfather's farm! Such relaxing moments after a hard days work lying under the moons soft light!

  • Purrsanthema
    August 20
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    What a beautiful little painting! I have always loved the harvest moon, and to see her so beautifully crowned here is a joy!


  • crivanea silver member
    August 20
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    pure beauty


  • sideways hourglass
    August 20
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    lovely image.


  • Nevel
    August 20

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    I really like this, wonderful imagery "to raise a glass of summer past" wow...the s-sounds only A little gem to me. Good luck to you
    Erwin

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