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once again

I turned to the blade once again
the deeper the cut the better the friend
my screams are silent once again
repeating everyday until my life is at end
I tried to  be cool get in with the trend
just like the skinny girls attract all the men
i shoved my fingers down my throat just to fit in
bruises and burns all part of my sin
lord im sorry i punished myself will you still let me in?
Tell David i love him
Tell my mom shes a bitch
My sister shes amazing
Dad go to hell im sick of your shit
this is it almost the end
i took these pills so you wont see me again
no more yelling, no more fighting, no more screaming, no more crying.
3 years later after all of this its about time im fucking dyeing
im not gunna write that i love you cause id be lyeing
i dont know why im crying as im writing
death is all so real living is all so fake
i cant live in this world so im taking a break
so goodbye lovers, goodbye friends,
goodbye everyone who helped bring my life to an end.

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  • anawarfare
    October 19

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    amazing!
    wow.
    speechless. this is a really amazing write. some major raw emotion and very exciting too read. Very intense. I loved every line. I loved the way it flowed so perfectly! Great JOb!!! KUDOS!!


  • Fallen-Thumper
    October 13
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    Stunning

    this piece is amazing and i love it, but dont end your life carry on writing, this is fantastic and i love it. amazing!
    -penguin-


  • Samantha-x
    September 28

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    wow.

    That is a truly stunning poem. So powerful and angry.
    You're a fantastic writer.
    I hope things get better for you.
    Sadly though, I can really relate.


  • BrokenInToPieces
    August 26

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    Wow, this was strong. Sorry you have to do this to fit in, 'i shoved my fingers down my throat just to fit in' i relate to that line so much. Stay strong. And you're a really good poet.


  • silentlovex3
    August 20

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    wow please dont go yet...and ur a rly good poet


  • bfmvalentine
    August 20
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    nice


  • shelbymarie
    August 20

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    This really shows your pain and agony. Lots of emotion. You are a great poet. Never doubt yourself, and you are never alone, as long as there is someone who is willing to help. And I want you to know, I will be there to help you if you ever need it.


  • dukeshorts
    August 20
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    ??

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  • Breathe.Into.Me
    August 20
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    This poem is very good and I really liked it.
    Bookmarked


  • Angel-of-Chaos
    August 20

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    Everything I've always wanted to say to the people who treat me as if I don't matter. You did a wonderful job expressing your pain and anger towards people, I really like this piece.

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