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Beauty Tears

Beauty tears and drops of blood
falling so fast
I can't tell one apart from the other.
They fall to the same puddles
and sometimes I wonder
If I don't cry blood
and bleed tears...
And someone could always tell me,
but they'd have to be around for that.

I know it's depressing but my it fits me lately

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  • Disturbed Sanctuary
    August 21

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    8 Lines

    And it's STILL really strong. You say a lot in those few lines. It sucks that you're in pain, but even through that pain you write wonderfully.


    • Starlette
      September 5
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      Thanks sweetie! Every day gets better but the memory of the pain will always exist and all I wanted was for someone to understand, so thank you.