sometimes your yellow
because of your smile
but you can get blue
every once in a while
there's another color
you can be pretty green
oh, and kind of red when your angry
then your kinda mean
when your shocked
your purple, I think
and when your embarrassed
your cheeks are pink
well, I guess your every color
from your smile to your frown
so I guess if you mix 'em together...
you are a lovely shade of brown
Author notes
for my best friend Emily! she is brown.
A contest entry
- Color Me Special by ScarsFade.
1300 points, ended September 2, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what did ya think? please be harsh. I want to make this better. :]
Comments
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Very well written. You got me to laughing a bit at the last stanza... not a rainbow... just brown. LOL! Good luck and keep the ink flowing.
~Donna~
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I think this is AMAZING!!!!! THAt is what i really wanted well written that was HILARIOUS YOU GOT MY PARENTS LAUGHING!!! OH well done well done indeed good luck in the contest!!!!
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