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Trapped

Fantasies
leave me staggering


A kiss on your sugar coated lips,
becomes deadly.


Close your eyes and you will it
a sudden rush, the limp feeling
caught inbetween hope and despair
when it suddenly ends....

 

 

Author notes

pic prompt - http://make-coffee-not-war.deviantart.com/art/Strange-beauty-64174643

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    August 26

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    Ohhh this is deliciously dangerous and seducative, the mind goes wild with thoughts and flavours of what it'd taste like What a take on the picture hun!

    ♥
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    August 20
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    Nice take on the prompt!


  • Kathraina silver member
    August 20

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    Wow, amazing write. It really made me think!

    I love your take on the prompt. I love the imagery in the second stanza!

    Bravo and thank you for entering

    ♥ Kate


  • February Moon gold member
    August 20

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    Nicely written and very enjoyable to read.