Moon-whipped shadows skid across the planes
As spirits rise up in
turquoise ecstasy
Gouging out their eyes in
sea-side jealousy,
Thundering for her attention;
"Goddess!" They cry, voices like rain,
"We are here."
Author notes
S p i n n e r A n d T he H a w k
A contest entry
- Everyone wins points!! Quickie by spiritraven.
575 points, ended August 19, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Very Good!!
Interesting form. Perfect imagery and powerful words. The title is great. Thank you for entering my contest and best of luck
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Thank you so much for the comment and for selecting my poem for the Silver place!
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oh! I loved the vivid imagery in this poem!!! It was short but descriptive and beautiful!
Good luck in the contest!
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Thanks so much I really appreciate it !
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