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Power in the moment
yet weakness underlying
a moment to steal
everything close and dear
to one open heart

Closing one world
for a moment in power
the feeling of empowerment
leaving one heart
to close to the world

You feel on top of the world
and they feel beneath the dirt
you walk all over them
just to have that moment

Your weakness makes you do it
your evil heart still lies
and in your eyes
you hide your real meaning

Your words cut their skin
so lightly they can not feel it
till you climb inside them
just to tear them apart
for that one fleeting moment

You destroy everything you touch
and sadly you still ask why
yet even sadder no one
will end your reign of terror

Till one day you destroy
the wrong person and finally
someone destroys you

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  • Not-The-Sun
    August 20

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    I likey i really enjoyed the meaning behind the fifth stanza. and as for the sixth stanza, especially "yet even sadder no one
    will end your reign of terror", it can really can relate to a lot of things in this world;
    the last stanza is prob my favorite part though; we think things are going well for us and we are on a roll and then suddenly someone with more will power, strength, or passion will overcome you. great work!