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Always

I hate knowing that I can't let you go
That every song that I hear
Is like every note that you would whisper in my ear

These days have grown far too long
I remember wishing that the day would go on
As our eyes were wet with goodbyes

My mind is moving way too fast
But it's always on the same path
Tell me, how's it feel?
To know that you're all I think about.

Not finished, maybe.

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