Destiny brought us together
fate kept us apart
My love for you is forever
I gave you my heart
I still see you in passing
then we both must leave
Still my love is everlasting
I hope that you believe
There is a reason that we met
and we must find out why
Until that day that you let
me in your heart I' ll cry
I can still remember when
I let you walk on by
I wont let you go again
without telling you the reasons why
You make my heart melt
it's because my love for you
In each heartbeat can be felt
and a dream come true
A contest entry
- Constructive Criticism. by Blue-Rose Beauty.
580 points, ended August 21, 62 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Oh SO SAD. Yet hopeful to
Good luck in the contest
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Oooo.. my god this one is sooooo beautiful , ..gud luck in the contest my dear !!
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Destiny brought us together
fate kept us apart
I love those lines, I just want to spend minutes digesting the beauty and pains of those lines. Now let me finish the rest of the poem.
The rest of the poem wasn't disappointing, thank you for entering such a lovely write
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