I never meant to disappoint you
But now it's too late
I grew up to be the very thing
That you have grown to hate.
Don't i remind you
Of a certain other person?
Someone who left these same old scars
That i'm sure only worsen.
You didn't even look my way
As i walked out the door
You didn't say goodbye
Is our friendship of no more?
I haven't heard her voice in days
It's tearing me apart
The one person i looked up to
And i broke her heart.
I know i'm just like him
You don't have to tell
I know that's all i remind you of
We made your life hell.
Two different fathers
But we're one and the same
Brother and sister
Look what we both became.
I feel dissapointed...
.. Disappointed beyond belief...
So dissapointed...
...Dissapointed in me...
-8/19/09
*awaits the critics*
Comments
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Very impressive job really deep
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I like the reflection and am moved by the personal implications. Nothing like a little sincerity to make a poem something worth writing.
It could use some work, but you've got a good foundation, speaking from emotion to invoke that emotion in others.
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