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Me

I do not believe I am as good as people say
I do not believe I am right most of the time
I do not believe there will come a brighter day
I do not believe I will get better with time

I do believe I am  not worth very much
I do believe I always feel displaced
I do believe I've lived life on a crutch
I do believe what good I've done is erased

I cannot believe I am in this situation
I cannot believe things have gotten this bad
I cannot believe there is an end to my tribulation
I cannot believe I have made you so sad

I do believe you'd be better off without me
I do believe I could truly  let you go
I do believe you have reason to doubt me
I do believe that I deserve every blow.

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  • galfalfa gold member
    August 22, 2009

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    Rough times test our love, ..we all mess up from time to time...i think the thing is though, we are suppose to learn from it and not do it again
    Love me when i least deserve it , for that's when i need it the most..

  • surreal realist
    August 20, 2009
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    Dude, don't be so hard on yourself. We all fuck up. We all have good too. just give things time.