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LoveHate

Degrade me lovingly, please,
And beat me gently to my knees.
Rape me and tell me I’m a tease.
Degrade me lovingly please.
Break me peacefully down,
And throw me sweetly to the ground.
Hold me so I’m scared to make a sound.
Break me peacefully down.
Bruise me caringly, I beg,
And pin me softly to the bed.
Beat me gently till I’m dead.
Bruise me caringly, I beg.
Degrade me lovingly, please,
And beat me gently to my knees.
Rape me and tell me I’m a tease.
Degrade me lovingly, please.

Author notes

My idea while writing this poem was that the speaker is the sufferer of abuse and the requests are ironic rather than literal. The words of the poem reflect those of the abuser more than anything the victim would ever really say: that they were asking for it, that they only do it because they get them so fired up, etc. The BDSM interpretation is equally valid. Take it as you wish.

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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