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In the Light of Day

Everything that seemed okay
Looks broken in the light of day.
For every single word you say
I take another step away,
Inside myself where you can’t see;
Imprisoned where I can’t get free.
I with something could bridge the gap,
But nothing’s capable of that.
Words are beyond me in here
And I can’t stand to have you near,
But please don’t think that you’re to blame
When no one answers to my name.
Everything that seemed okay
Looks broken in the light of day.
In silence I wish that I could say,
I don’t want to push you away.

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