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I Was a Child

Time has torn me away from myself.
I値l carry on and be somebody else.
Thinking back, I知 sure that I knew,
But now I am lost between lies and truth.
I was a child,
Now I知 just a shell of myself.
I was alive,
Now I barely
Feel alive at all.
Time has left meaning to decay;
Watch the very feelings bleed away.
Thinking back, I知 sure that I cared,
But now I don稚 even know what痴 there.

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