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Nature 2

The ground frost numbs
our toes as we
amble through it
while searching for
berries and happiness.

We can hear our
heartbeats on the cold
crisp air.

The lake relinquishes
to us all of its
benefits and none of its curses.

We are spellbound
by love and nature,
forever lost in their
elaborate dance.


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  • unraveled
    August 19
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    Your poems made me cry on second reading

  • unraveled
    August 19
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    This is really really beautiful baby