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Eulogy for a Cowboy

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Here lies a man of sun and sand
His days in the saddle are done
He stood for what he felt was right
Under stars or midday sun

Handy with a rope or gun
He lived the cowboy life
His only love, the open range
He never took a wife

He had decided long ago
The prairie was his bride
Loving her with all his heart
Until the day he died

Through heat and storm and blowing snow
You’d never hear him complain
Accepting life the cowboy way
No dreams of fortune or fame

Gently he spoke to other folks
A quiet man, but true
Lies refused to cross his lips
When the simple truth would do

Around the fire, he’d spin a tale
Of the places he had been
Or tell a joke to cheer us up
Then duck his head and grin

His spirit lives from this day on
Within us one and all
We’ll carry on his way of life
Standing straight and tall

The sod he loved, his blanket now
Beneath the open skies
His friends stand by with hats in hands
To bid him fond goodbyes

 

 

 

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  • poets whisper silver member
    November 2

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    his sod as a blanket. A very poetic line and quite visual. Nice rhyme too which I always enjoy. Thank you for entering


  • FloridaGatorQueen silver member
    September 9

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    This is very beautifully written. I love me a good cowboy story. This was a sad one but I liked it. I enjoyed the read!!! Thank you for entering my contest

  • Second try

    I just want to leave some applause.

  • A Marvelous poem.

    This is such a great poem that it has to be one of the best I've read here. Your word choices provide your readers with many wonderul pictures, and at times while reading it, I felt like I was the cowboy out there under the stars. You are a great storyteller, and that's a rare gift. I really enjoyed this and will certainly be back for more.

    I'm trying to leave you three rounds of applause but nothing's happening. I've tried three times.


    • An Old Codger gold member
      August 23
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      Thanks very much for reading and for the more than kind comment. I certainly appreciate it.


  • glenn shannon silver member
    August 23

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    fine ded to a cowboy loved it and you pen so well like a painting of westerns


  • ArtRocks27
    August 22

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    Lively!

    I could see all of what you were writing in such great detail in my minds eye. It was great!!!!! I've always been a very visual person so anything that can give me a picture will help me understand it that much more better. The life of a cowboy seems to be soemthing that we don't hear that much of anymore. The thing that saddens me greatly is that it seems to be slowly becoming more part of the past. The pictures really add to the effect. Thank you for sharing it with me!!

    Maggie

  • an excellent eulogy to the cowboy and the cowboy lifestyle, which is slowly dying as well. Perhaps there's a cowboy heaven...like this one:
    http://allpoetry.com/poem/2620048

    I enjoyed this write immensely, well done, friend.

    Rory


    • An Old Codger gold member
      August 21
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      Thanks for your kind comment and also for the link. Both are greatly appreciated.


  • Night Hope gold member
    August 20

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    I read this one last night and was quite moved by it. I agree; you are a good storyteller...a requirement for any writer of any form. Rhyming isn't easy to pull off, I know. You've done so admirably with this piece. The story you told reminded me so much of my stepdad. He was born in Indian Territory before Oklahoma became a state. He lived and died on the land he grew up on (not the original home, but one he built nearby). He had so many tales to tell, all of them well-worth listening to. He was considered to be the walking, talking "Farmer's Almanac" in Greenfield, near Watonga. I always loved visiting him and my mom on the farm; I once stayed for my entire two-week vacation and hated to leave. I told him the area reminded me of the beginning of "Bonanza" and I would dearly love to cross it on horseback. He was a wonderful man and I miss his presence in my life...but not in my heart, where he remains. Good one, Poet.

    • An Old Codger gold member
      August 20
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      Thank you so very much. I'm familiar with the Watonga area. I do still miss my mountains in southeastern Oklahoma. I'd move back in a heartbeat if there were jobs to be had or if the cattle market was better.


  • John Faulkner gold member
    August 19

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    This is great..I loved it..you are a good storyteller..You keep the reader involved in nyour write..This is a compliment.There ia a sadnes to this, as well.I loved it..so good

    John


  • Ann45 gold member
    August 19

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    Hehe this is just such an enjoyable read, well done huni How's you? Keep up with the excellent work


  • Jade.Butterfly gold member
    August 19

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    Why do i read your poems? why?
    Because it is so damn brilliant !!!
    I don't have to say anymore, do I ?
    I just loved this.
    You my friend are an amazing writer!!
    -Mandi


    • davidb7869 silver member
      August 19
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      I agree with the butterfly here...these could be lyrics for a great country song....that being said I tip my hat to this!

      --Dave


    • An Old Codger gold member
      August 19
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      Thanks so much Miss Jandi. I don't know about the amazing part. Amazingly strange maybe.


  • Dixie Dawn gold member
    August 19

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    I ADORE YOU, YOUR WORK IS THAT WHICH FILLS MY SOUL, ITS PERFECT, AND YOU WRITE SPLENDIDLY, SUPERBLY, THANK YOU SO FOR SHARING YOU, IT IS INDEED A GIFT. LOVE YA, DIXIE


  • Rheea gold member
    August 19

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    yea, it is not sad it is a celebration of a good life. well said.


    • An Old Codger gold member
      August 19
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      A hard life to be sure but the freedom and experiences outweigh the bad ten fold.

      Thanks as always sis.


  • poorme
    August 19
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    i think you nailed it. perfect.....


  • Mellindrae
    August 19
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    oh, that's sad. Lovely, but sad.


    • An Old Codger gold member
      August 19
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      Thanks so much for reading and commenting. I always appreciate it.


      • Mellindrae
        August 19
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        not a problem
        and perhaps, not sad..but..touching, I guess is the word I'm looking for.

        • An Old Codger gold member
          August 19
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          I understood, no problem at all. Loss of life is a sad occasion. But if you know that person lived a full and happy life it's also a time to celebrate the way they lived.

          Thanks again.

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