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Christmas Memories

Melded and scattered;
droplets in the wind
the heart's minor pleasure

glistening with colors of gold
silver and green, reds delight
eye sight that has long gone bad

Yet ears bask in contentment
as songs remind one
of years gone past;
those winters full of love.

Author notes

I was thinking of Christmas and winter *_* I love that time of year

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  • HereComesTheSun
    August 19
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    i enjoyed the poem but i wonder were Christmas and lavender meet lol :]


    • MenthrinKuth
      August 19
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      XD You have my apologies, ma'am. I didn't see that part of it at all. Ah well, you can always kick it out of the contest, considering it doesn't meet what you were looking for. But thank you for reading it.