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"Animal or angel? You were carved from bone, but your heart it's just sand."

I have to wash you off my skin
scrub until it's pink and raw
from a distance you look renewed
but false truths devour 
from the inside out
sloughed over and shed off
I am so dispensable
obsolete

gullible-
so unsophisticated and trusting.

The Hawk has you in her clutches, My Little Snake.
Right where she wants you.
Willing to be dined upon with a smile on your face.


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  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    September 29
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    Thought-provoking...

    I thought this poem to be very metaphoric. Keep it flowing...
    Peace,
    Cyn


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    August 20
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    loks like a chick as snatched your fella cherry,,lol now now,, i enjoyed this,,,pete


  • Sarahbear09
    August 19
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    Wow, powerful write. It makes you stop and think about it. Thanks so much for sharing