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Little Brother

1. Nathan Coffer
2. 17 years old
3. Can't Decide
4. fav. poet-- http://allpoetry.com/Salt%20Therapy
5. I'm the youngest of 5 children, and i'm they're favorite little brother (:
6. best poem-- http://allpoetry.com/poem/5636291

7.

Sunshine
moonlight,
constriced and confused
by the future yet unknown.

8.
I) Playing guitar
II) Writing (Novels, poetry)
III) Girls with black hair. (:
IV) Jimi Hendrix
V) That in only 17 years of life, i've been through so many
experiences and that I can reflect them into beautiful works of art. (:

9. Voodoo Child- Jimi Hendrix
    The Wind Cries Mary- Jimi Hendrix
    Who Are You?- The Who
    Baba O' Riely- The Who
    Wanted Dead Or Alive- Bon Jovi

10. As often as possible (:
11. When I get a chance.
12. About once a week

13. I've been through rehab twice in the past 6 months, i've lived enough for any average man in just the past few years. My dream isn't to become a rockstar, but to go to Stanford and learn more about writing. (:

14. Your favorite little brother in the whole world (:

A contest entry

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  • crivanea
    September 1

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    awww..so cute! going to Stanford was my dream in 5th grade....but by 9th grade it became UCLA...and then I realize CA is too expensive to live in..lol!

    haven't read anything by ST so i'll keep that in mind

    lovely 10 words

    hmm..i have black hair
    i too am writing a novel..hopefully i'll get it published by the time i'm done with college..sighh...

    thank you for your application