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from a distance



You are the hovering dagger above my heart...

                keep your hand steady

                                          your aim true

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  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    October 3

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    Wow...

    Truly heart-piercing... It's like you're asking them to come after you. I'm not so sure it's YOU who is really wanting this. But anyway, it's a great poem!! Keep it flowing...
    Peace,
    Cyn


  • poetryality silver member
    August 26

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    This poem speaks to me saying; "I would gladly die for you". Brilliant! I love brevity! You have made my adoration even greater. I wish you well in the contest. My goodness! So much said with just 15 words. Genius!


    Much Love & Respect ♥

    Renee


  • just mercedes gold member
    August 24
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    very direct and startling image! well done.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    August 20
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    creatively captured... x