You're blurry
from a distance,
But my heart sees where
My eyes fall short.
from a distance,
But my heart sees where
My eyes fall short.
Author notes
I have done a couple of poems about my eyesight, and how it effects my life, both on the everyday level and on the more intangible level as well. I only hope that I can get others to see what I see, not with my eyes, but with my mind and heart. 
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A contest entry
- between 10 and 15 words only by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended August 26, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Pray, tell me your thoughts?
Comments
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Beautiful thought The heart does indeed see what our eyes cannot. Short piece, full of truth . A touching write.
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awesome
i love it, great job.
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so beautifully done... x
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