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Out Of Control

Insanity brings me back
after imense pain.

My heart is racing
and mind is pounding.

This beautiful casualty
has taken my life.

Addiction has broken me.

Author notes

Drawn in again by the mysterious mistress of addiction.

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  • Macsword
    August 19
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    And it will!

    Good stuff poet against a harsh reality.


  • Cannonsfire
    August 19

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    Thank you for such a powerful entry C