Shadows bleed around me
dripping with words of pain
as I am covered with animosity
of all you never did say.
You swallowed me whole
as you choked on your lies
you bled into me softly
together we died,
emotional suicide.
alone i have become
once again,
always the enemy...
never the friend
I am alone again.
I Called your name aloud
time after time
as you hid behind your tongue
such sweet words of deception
as you became everyone.
You tried my patience
with negativity
you tried to blame me...
for being me.
was anything real....
forget that question
just gives you another excuse to steal,
taking from me
what I never did have
as you smirk in your silent laugh.
I watched you dig your grave
I stood in silence
while you pretended to pray
now go away!
I buried you
once and for all
our graves side by side
as WE became the fall.
I love us,
you used to say
us became you
as you took us away.
now go away!
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow Misty ! This is an incredible and very deep write! You have penned a great one hear... although it holds within it much pain and sorrow, which you have expressed wonderfully by the way, It flows along nicely. As sad as it is never the less a pleasure to read.
Keep it up my friend...awesome write!!!
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this is intense hun!!!!very cool but-
but it isnt fair to simply, hollowly, emptily say such things... these are not the words you want to hear nor the ones you need to hear ya know; just the first spoken words i can say for whatever its worth... in truth it isnt cool for you to bleed your emotions here, it isnt cool for you to feel the damage and know the emptiness absorbing you for the deceit of someone less than who they pretend to be! you seem to be "door number one" for the choices of uncool shit and it does touch me hun, it really does. i think of you often and wonder how it is in your world and then i pop in here and find that your world is just as shitty as always just like mine. i wish i could bring some small light to yours and regret that somehow we drifted apart from the same reasoning that we did share once upon a time... find some peace hun, not in god but in yourself, and i am always here in some way or another ya know!!!
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An very deep poem with the raw emotions spilling off the page. Very welll crafted. So sad. I have definately felt that way before.
Love & Light
Debbera
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