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forgive the idiot

this dark light,
it's filling in my mind,
i need some light to shelter me,
before my heart dies.

i need you here,
i need you forever,
ive given you it all,
even a ring,
and my hearts love shelter.

my angel has gone,
shes left me dieing in the dark,
left to me dwell in these tears,
for being the biggest jerk.

i never relized just how much it hurt,
to hear about thelove of your life,
messing with someone else,
wether your together,
or your apart.

if id thought about it,
about what ive done,
id turn back time,
and make it be you,
as my hearts number one.

forgive me,
its all i ask of you,
forgive me,
and i could prove my real lov for you.

dedicated to: keana shay ferguson

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