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Breathe

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Two
Three
Breathe in

Slow down
Think fast
Bury it
In the past
Look up
Glance down
Eyes front
Ghost town
Smile wide
Nod head
Natural
Mislead
Relax
Blank page
Permanent
Rearrange
Cheery laugh
Biting wit
Shake it off
Submit

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Two
One
Breath out

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  • tshepiso
    August 20

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    couldn't have asked for more :thank you !!

    just when i was about to loose my mind,i read this and thank you ,i am now smiling wide!!!.it's unique and healing :i loved it .we need more like this ..


  • Melee Vau gold member
    August 20

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    I related to this poem about holding onto your feelings and just moving on one breathe at a time. such deep feelings conveyed in disarmingly simple words.


  • dukeshorts
    August 20
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    i dont understand it?