A cool world awakens around the pool
as it is reflecting me, reflecting leaves on trees
Fresh dew drips, and all ripples
my skin blends with bark till I and the othercombine
one sees a world's secret in water
te surface holds separate lives
but its shimmer shows that we are one
Please tell me what you think
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a good poem penned - ah reflection, to be lsot in the thin line of reality's surface and illusion's ruffled movement, the sky meets the watered sanctuary of nature's face.



