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Stolen

hands.
groping.
wanting.
taking.

mouth.
shut.
body
shifting.

voice.
muffled.
screaming.

door?
locked.

phone?
floor.

fingers.
fumbling.
speaking.
heard.

chance?
found.

phone.
keys.
door1
door2.
rain.
car.

safe.
drive.

good? bad? indifferent?

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  • Broken Machine
    August 18

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    Oh my gosh. Were you raped? Are you okay??? I really like the poem. I like the way you wrote it. It made each word stand out more because you had to focus on each one to get the whole picture. Great job, keep it up.