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Wetting My Trousers.






wetting my trousers--
a short
rain-coat







Andrew Hide
31~03~2004

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Written March 31st, 2004

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  • Ava Noire silver member
    April 4, 2004
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    :S I don't even OWN a rain coat. Probably should buy one...perhaps one of these days. The rain won't melt ya yanno


  • Manicmuze
    April 1, 2004
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    You are very creative... i find it so hard to have profound little thoughts like this... i need two pages to get there :-)

    Enjoyed,
    ~ Wendy


  • bridgetjanejone
    April 1, 2004
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    Andrew - I really like this. I've been putting off reading it beause of the title! That's not very open-minded of me is it ?

  • Essence13
    March 31, 2004
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    LOL. Another very fuuny write. Its amazing how you fit soo much, it just a few words. Great write, keep up the good work!


  • Etoile de Tir
    March 31, 2004
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    Another great one! You have a way with few words and tons of vivid imagery. Beautifully done! Great job. Keep it up!

    Mal


  • Blue moon
    March 31, 2004
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    well done another amazing piece!
    Edited on Mar 31, 2:25 p.m. because ''.


  • LadyUnique silver member
    March 31, 2004
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    loved it!!


  • SusanL
    March 31, 2004
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    How do you do this? Humor in what 8 syllables. I am finally comfortable in a 17 syllable Haiku take any away and I can't do it I have tried... You are amazing... Really truly amazing...

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