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Liquid Reflections ( Kiss )

Missing image

Twilight Intoxicates the vision in sombre

hues of unbuttoned fragments

Little crystals flood the pleasure center,

travel Into a place where time stands still

Stir tender, arouse through flesh and fire

Lips tracing the curve on skin, broken

candlelight drifting ..

Lips blemished with Ivory stains sipping

liquid sin, paint me beautiful in the liquid

reflection of your kiss

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  • Collapsing Pain
    October 26
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    yeahh


  • Desire gold member
    August 25

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    Wow~

    Now I was Mesmerized by the vibrating Image
    I at first was like...Okies...
    I am either in The Twilight Zone or that Image
    is breathing
    Oh My~ what a sight to see...
    for my to do List

    Adore the Metaphors in Your verse
    and that beginning line~Woot!!
    sigh...

    when I got to part...time stands still...
    I was still moving because of the Image
    breathing

    In a weird mood today so please forgive me...
    Been hit with the giggle bug

    This is a Powerful piece~
    grabs...especially part...
    paint me beautiful in the liquid
    reflection of your kiss

    Just Love that~
    Thank You for sharing Your Voice
    Best wishes in all You do
    with love & light~ Desire~*~


    • Deceits Tears silver member
      August 25
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      LOL Having the giggle bug is a good thing
      Thankyou for your lovely words and your time, I am glad you like this


  • storiesuntold gold member
    August 23
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    Awesome work here

    Indeed you sure know how to kiss a page with love


  • redmoonnrizing silver member
    August 19

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    Your imagery is beyond compare. I could not help but to be pulled into this piece from the first word. This is what love and passion is all about. sigh..........


    • Deceits Tears silver member
      August 19
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      I love trying to come up with something for the great pictures I find thankyou for your time and kind comments


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    August 18

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    wow what to say, your writes are so beautiful,
    your words Gosh, i am so moved with this most
    beautiful write, your words penned Tenderly
    Love and Blessings

    Rend


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    August 18

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    Another damn fine write from the passionate kiwi. Very well done. The ending was my favorite part. This is the type of imagery I wish I could do myself.

    Mike


    • Deceits Tears silver member
      August 19
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      The pictures I find have to take the credit, I love the imagery they convey
      Thankyou

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