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Frail

Why is the human heart,
The human soul,
So weak,
So frail,
So ready to fail?

Is it Fate for them to die so easily?
The weakness is their strength,
Once discovered,
It can be used as both,
Love is power,
But also a way to become weak...
...Once attained....
Don't...ever....let it go........

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  • Phantom-Phanatic
    September 16

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    wow...

    this is the type of thing i really love. it keeps one thinking even after the piece is over. well done.