Some people solve their problems by cutting, some will just push them away, and yet others try to write poems about them. Neither of these are proper ways to fix problems, and only provides temporary relief, but, sometimes, for some people, its enough
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short, sweet, and to the point.
in the 2nd line, were you talking about people pushing problems away, or people pushing others who cut away? 4th line, "of" should be between "neither", and "these", and put a semi-colin at the end too. 5th line, "and" should be changed to "they", and put a period at the end. please fix the errors i have pointed out.
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