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Loved and Lost

Those who are alone have nothing to lose,
but those in love have everything they want,
those without love keep drinking booze,
those in love, their lover they taunt,
the world can be equally cruel to both,
making the lonely never loved,
or the loved lose the other, 
when this happens they go crazy,
and when love is lost, suicide is often sought,
never to be loved one will try to party, drink troubles away, or be lazy,
the lover losing the other, their own mind they must of fought,
in this situation which is worse?
To have never loved and be loved in return,
or to have loved and lost?
Once you get love, protect the lover with your life,
and the lonely must hurry for love to end their strife.

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  • individuality gold member
    August 20

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    this is truly lovely! i want to hug it until it pops with passion, but i can not do that for i would have to mop the floor then and i do not wish to get up from my chair and clean passion from the floor. but i digress, yes, it is truly beautiful writing that sends out wonderful images for the reader to enjoy! you have fashioned a fine poem (like a brooch onto my heart) that i appreciate so much.