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Crying Liquor

I was sitting there,
crying liquor.
With both of you,
on each side.
She asked,
who did I love more.
I took,
a double shot.
You tried to get me,
to tell.
I took,
another shot.
No chaser,
no rest.
Sitting inside,
crying.
Sitting in my bedroom,
drinking.
I had to,
one up her.
That night,
I looked for a beat.
A heartbeat,
that no one else has.
I sat alone,
searching for that rhythm.
I sat alone,
crying liquor.

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we had a party that night...my girlfriend kept asking questions of who i loved more..her or the girl i fell in love with. I was having too much fun keeping secrets...but drinking came easy to me. I drank too much that night and lost both of them for a little bit...i'm still paying for that night

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  • xconfettiheartx
    September 3, 2009
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    i cant even tell you how much i can relate to this. :/