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[ I’m sorry I’m stupid. ]

I’m sorry I’m stupid.
You are my one and only love.
But you won’t ever know I loved you.
For I loved with my head and hid it from you.
I told the world, including you that I could never love you.
That you just weren’t my type, but you were.
You might not have that six pack abs or 1st class popularity,
But you did everything for me no matter the cost for you.
You held me when I cried, you told me things would get better.
Guess What! It did get better, but I wish I had shared it with you.
You respected me, protected me from harm, and you loved “me”.

But I no longer deserve someone like you.
You deserve a girl that will be at your side through everything,
Not me that will be on the road 24/7, barely seeing you.
Someone that stares into your eyes and sees how amazing you are.
That knows every story about you, that loves you with all her heart
You deserve someone better so stop staring after me.
I will always love you but you deserve better so I’ll hide my feelings.
I’m sorry I destroyed all our dreams.
Sorry for being stupid.

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Not finished with, and if you read this, I am sorry but you do deserve better

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  • SilverWolf
    August 29

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    is this true sis??? OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO your NOT stupid!!

    lovez you!!


    • Mystery
      August 30
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      yes sis 100% true, wish it was one of my dreams though

  • deathwillcome
    August 26

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    i loved this poem it was amazing,,, it was sad yet beautiful,,, i dont really know what else to say besids that it is a great poem, and u shouldent revise it, everything is perfect,, ttys


  • Deaths Prayer
    August 18

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    six pack abs lol...i liked it and the form of it went well

    black and green goes well!!

  • xo awh kay this is so goodd :/ saddish and cute at the sam time...

  • I liked this. It was full of great emotions and imagery. I hope things get better. Well done.

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