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Past Love Returns

I saw something today,
That made my blood run cold,
The words on a worthless piece of paper,
That I could barely hold.

"Past love returns" it read,
And made my eyes go wide,
How could I ever take her back,
With the pain I feel inside?

She does not want me, does not need me,
I dare you to give a reason to believe so,
She crushed my heart, so soul, my mind,
I have never felt so low.

Maybe she does want me...
Maybe I could take her back,
Would she break my heart again?
Laugh in the face of my eternal love?

I hate seeking answers I do not have.

What do you think?

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  • DragonHeart
    December 19, 2009

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    wow i can like totally relate to this! i've been through the same thing and yeh i guess it's hard to see whether you can give the girl you love a second chance...whether its a second chance of eternal love or a second chance to break you heart :/
    i really like the last line it's like damn you actually have to dwell on this :/
    it flows really well like the title and then the first line
    wow loves <3
    =] keep writing