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Forever?

A single tear runs down her face
As he yells about something else
She loves him so much
And she know he loves her
She keeps crying
Praying it will all get better,
Once he’s healthier
She plans on standing behind him
No matter what anyone else says
They don’t understand
Neither does she at times
But she knows her heart wont lie
So she wipes her eyes
and walks away...
tomorrow is another day

What would you tell her?

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  • sotanosister
    October 2

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    I see you trust your heart. We don't know the destination of our journey in love, but I see now (and it took a long time to get there) that in my heart it all has meaning, it all has purpose. It is all for love, whether we see it at the time or not. There is of course that little item about not being able to love another more than you love yourself, but you are right--- your heart won't lie. I am glad you are listening.