Velvet touches
stroke my body
the mind gently
follows to a place
where we are alone
in complete awareness
of being together
experiencing mindfulness
lasting forever
chills descend upon my being
as we glide
along the heavens
of complete ecstasy!
Author notes
And who says it doesn't get better with age!
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the poem is very romantic..
there is no thing as splendour as love..
congrats!!
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joyful surrender to love's rewards. a heart well shared in these lines.
nicely done
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this is so beautiful!! just lovely!
thank you so much for stopping
by to read.
many blessings
Rend
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yep, aint nothing as grand as two
becoming one, my favorite kind of math, and you mulitplied it's joy well here.~~~Artis
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I don't know what ecstasy means, but it sounds good. If you made each line a little longer, then it would sound better. It seems a little short.
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How sweet are words of you which comes from a sweet heart, my respected auntie! I do agree, love gets stornger. I'm so glad you have suh happy feeling inside of yourself.
Thank you for sharing your beauitufl thoughts with us and good luck
~Massy with love~
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very well written ....... heavenly pleasures described in the appropriate from a point of view of a living person.
you may like my poem "The Judgement Day" http://allpoetry.com/poem/5220129
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