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Up Close & Personal




I want to get
up close and personal
with you-

running my hand
over your chest and
through your hair-

breathing in the essence
of "you"
with every breath I take-

tasting your soul
with every kiss
I happen to chance-

I want to get
up close and personal
with you-

entwining your heart
with mine
on the "sea of love"
as our bodies
meld into each other.







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  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    September 26

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    wow your someone must be mighty special to you,
    you have been showing so much love for this person.
    whoever " someone " is they are so blessed to have you
    in their life. you are such a sweet and caring person.

    loveandblessings2u & yours always
    joyce


  • Dryad Enya
    September 23

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    I couldn't ask for more if I tried. Really you just hit every nail on the end, not suprised you got honorable mention this is a powerful write that stops us in our tracks. You write like no one else, using your own passion to express the emotion of your poetry. Brillaint write indeed can't wait to read more of your works!
    Keep writting!
    Dryad Enya


  • Bluemonday silver member
    September 1

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    A very lovely soft poem full of passion. An exciting read...thank you Dan


  • earthstar
    August 22

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    It a lovely write so full of love and passion. You make is beautiful with passion and love.For me it made me sad I thought of all the times when my husband was getting along. I yearn for those days again.
    Your title up close and personal I sometimes think many marriages on the surface is vague with no direction.
    I love it you go young lady keep up the positive attitude about love


  • Swtpoetryman
    August 22

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    WELL, IF YOU INSIST, BABY - I'M ALL YOURS TO DO WITH AS YOU DESIRE! HE! HE!

    Whatever lights your fire, Baby! LOL!!

    GOOD LUCK in this contest with this one, my sweet and sensual friend - who will be shaking the earth to it's HOT, MOLTEN CORE and very soon now - as time is just a-flying by. O, what a night that is going to be. Something tells me the stars will be shooting in the sky all over the world when you hook up with the object of your heart and souls - and sexy bodies desire, as well. Thanks for sharing this one as it hit the spot on what is a very humid day that is starting to turn gray as it is supposed to be a stormy one later this evening and tomorrow from a hurricane that will be passing us by out to sea.

    Love & Peace!
    Earl.

  • sotanosister
    August 21

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    Sexual and sensual are such personal words/experiences. It is hard to be explicit without going too far, for my taste at least. You did well. Ah, memories.


  • JoeCavedIn
    August 21

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    What a good, write... I don't know how to get to that mood... I've been there but i don't know how to get aback


  • Desire gold member
    August 19

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    Wow~

    I had to close my eyes for the Images were getting
    Saucy there Sis


    I almost walked into a wall trying to find myself
    HOT~ and what are You trying to do...
    raise the temperature here

    Geeeeeeeeeeesh~
    Love this

    Thank You for sharing Your Voice
    Best wishes in the contest
    with love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Goddess of illusion
    August 19

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    Wow...

    A few people can say it like you do sis, this write was just wow... A few people can feel this deep... I really,really loved this!!!!


    Big 's to you


  • Stardust-luvr
    August 18

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    well done sis as i know how much your heart beats for him well done and many blessings always xxx


  • John BoSox
    August 18

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    So quaint ..lovely ..so nice ..I can feel your love..affection........He can also.....don't you know...This is so beautifull....I loved it..great write

    John


  • Rick Weston silver member
    August 18

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    very nice. i really like the lines "taste your soul with every kiss" thanks for sharing a moving write.


  • Jade.Butterfly gold member
    August 18

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    Oh this was hot!
    very sensual.. Girl you know i loved this one!
    Made me sweat. lol
    Up close up personal, eh? mmmm
    I liked this and it went very well for the prompt..
    You go girl. Good luck my friend!
    Love to ya always,
    Mandi S and s


  • Paladin Warrior
    August 18
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    what if I am bald


  • Hikari Lady
    August 18

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    Up close and personal, yes, this write brings flames to the heart. Nicely penned.

    Love
    ~Noor


  • michellemybelle gold member
    August 18

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    Intimacy and passion perfectly woven! Just lovely!
    love and ss,
    Michelle


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    August 18

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    Sooo very loving...sigh
    Makes me think of my baby
    Love this! Thank you so much for sharing!!!

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